Maui & The Sun. Hope you enjoy : )

Maui & The Sun
Several years ago the sun would go around very fast
and people couldn't finish off there work. The days
were to short and the night were to long there was
very little time for them to do what they had to do.
The village asked Maui if he could help them, what
can we do to get the day’s longer. So Maui called
everyone from the village together, they work as
a team, they made long robes from flags help
from all the  womens in the village, together
Maui and his brothers walk to the edge of
the world were the sun sleeps. “ We will
use the ropes to make a snare and we will
cathe the sun ” Maui told his brothers.
Finally the robes was ready so Maui and
his four brothers prepared themselves for
the long Journey. Maui and his brother
want off to the east to where the sun
rises each day. They traveled secretly
at the night while the sun slept carrying
the flux ropes with them they sprayed
the snare across  the sky so it was easy
to catch the sun when it rise they hid
behind the rock and waited until the
day began to down Maui hauled his
magic Joven in one hand and the
ropes of the snare in the other
hand. When the sun rise Maui
shouted “pull the ropes quickly
pull!! ” hold him brothers while
I beat him with my magic Joven
on the sun, the sun started to
say let me go let me go you
are hurting me. The brothers
pull harder and harder Maui beat
the sun with his magic weapon the
sun started to become so trained
on a scram of pain and he said stop
it stop it let me go, Why are you
hearing me? Because you move too
quickly across the sky each day but
you must promise me that you will
go slowly around the sky each day.
I promise I promise said painly so
Maui brothers let's go of the
ropes. So each day when the
sun rise up he remembers  to
go slowly a around the sky
each day and the people now
can finish off their work
Just because of the help
we can all get from Maui
and his four brothers .